My Character's Biography. (Being told in first person)

My home planet is Iridonia. Same as mostly all Zabrak.
I was taken at the age of 3 to begin my jedi training.
No one really expected me to amount to anything, none theless a jedi.
I had always been fascinated by swords. When i laid my eyes on a lightsaber, I was completly amazed.
I studied lightsaber combat my whole life. During any free time I had.
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When I reached the age of 13, I finally found another Zabrak. He was an adult zabrak jedi who had alot of knowledge of our race.
He helped me paint the tatoos on my face.
I chose a light white color paint.
He told me that that color meant tranquility and that I am at peace.
I felt good about that.
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When I reached the age of 18, my master got permission from the jedi council to give me my knight trials.
I passed my knight trials.
It has now been almost 2 years since i became a knight.
Im working on becoming a Jedi Master.
But, alot more training is needed to acheive such a goal.
I have still been training in lightsaber combat.
And occasionaly study the force.
I guess its good to be well rounded.
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That was my characters biography. Please tell me what you think =)

Height: 6'1
Species: Zabrak
Eye color: Blue
Skin Color: Tan
Face Paint Color: Light White
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That may not be neccisary but i thought i should include it =P